Friday, January 16, 2009

Yet ANOTHER Thing to Write

I am in the spelling bee at my school! It's me and Shelby for 8th grade...that's all. :))

Also, I was inspired by Andrea posting her first poem so here is mine, I feel exactly the same as her about it! It's my favorite, even though I've probably written better...

The Little Town

There is a pretty place
Where Ocean meets the land
The seagulls seem to chase
The crabs along the sand

Many people say it is
Quiet and serene
But I hear the sounds
Of a little town
Where dolphins play at sea

Please tell me what you think!

30 comments:

  1. Much less depressing than most of my poetry. Also, less philosophical, and with less obscure references to science fiction concepts. And I'm comparing POEMS. If we count all writing, well... most of my other writing is like the stuff in the poems times 25 (like that movie script I plan to write soon).

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  2. I like it. It's a little bland, but comforting.

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  3. glarey eyes at you! how dare you call my preciousness bland! rawr! rawr!! RAWR! RAWR!!

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  4. Even in my cave I am not safe... *eyes dart around nervously*

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  5. I was joking earlier about typing to each other despite close proximity, but honestly, it's pretty cool to be carrying on like 3 conversations at once, with transcript.

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  6. lol, gollum will get you and eat your brainses!

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  7. Beverly, I don't think siphoning gas out of Mom's car is a good idea...

    *as Beverly* What, the fumes? Don't worry, I'm gonna use that wet/dry vac Uncle Ernie got Dad for Christmas!

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  8. wth? what is wrong with you are you high or wut?

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  9. It's a reference to the movie script I'm working on! With the twins with multiple personality disorder!

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  10. I told you about this, didn't I? I know I showed you the concept art. Donna and Beverly! And Dr. Samuel and the Mom and Dad. And a smudge, not really sure where it came from, I think the paper got stepped on.

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  11. Hahaha, just had to share this with ya... the CAPTCHA word for that last post was "imanleg". WTF!!

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  12. Hey pessimistic brother of Emily! (Larissa told me about you)

    Anyway, I am honored, Emily, that I could actually inspire someone.

    You rock socks, man! (latest catchphrase)

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  13. ...i already wrote that a long time ago, just in case you thought otherwise, but yeas you did inspire me to post my first poem, and thanks for doing so! and i agree i do rock socks, dont I?

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  14. that was totally awesome emily!!!!!!!!!!! better than most anything i could do!
    i LOVE it

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  15. THAT WAS TOTaLLY AWESOME EMILY!
    BETTER THAN MOST ANYTHING I COULD DO!
    i LOVE it...

    oh the comment ventilator thingymabob just put salsici...so that is now my new "word" lol

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  16. salsici...now you just need to find a meaning for it...no wait! it means "to rip or tear viciously"

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  17. did u make that up? i like it lol...

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  18. well i was wanting to make a word that meant that, becausing i was tearing and ripping my scan card viciously the other day...i was salsiciing it!

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  19. haha...that is our "secret" word...

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  20. extremely secret, no one will know...

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  21. haha...dun dun dun...if someone finds out we will have to salsici them lol

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  22. kyler! naughty criminal thoughts!

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  23. well...it fits right in...what did the other one mean again?

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  24. nvrmnd...fashnose and it means a flair for fashion...the word ventilator just put tramp...obviously not a new word but finally one that makes sense lol

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  25. EMILY YOU NEED TO CHECK YOUR BLOG AND POST MORE!

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